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By Randle

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I dont know what this is sorry.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: I dont know what this is sorry.
    Status: Denied

I came for adventure and a new start at life and to help others.

Character Name: Frodo
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: I wear a red vest,No shoes,Green button up shirt,Dark green eyes,somewhat strong,Brown hair,130pounds,and normal height.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help <img src=

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
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  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Halflings are typically shorter!
  • Your Character Name and Biography follows a commonly-used character trope! Please be more creative with your backstory!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/

     

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