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Dinlas Of The Dark

By Dinlas Of The Dark

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: AndrewHambrew#8661
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: the use of real life knowledge concerning the state of the game to determine their character's actions
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: a way of interacting in a game aiming towards maximizing progress towards a specific goal
    Status: Denied

"I have come here for one reason and one reason only. to ki- I mean to obtain wealth.*nervous sigh*" said Dinlas

Character Name: Dinlas
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 28
Physical Description: 160 pounds, 5'10, grey skin, crimson eyes,
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are plagiarized. Please write them in your own words!
  • You cannot roleplay a god, as this is both lore-breaking and against the rules. Please be sure to change this.
  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin! (Eyes cannot be completely red)

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Make sure that you do not include actions in dialogue, only outside of quotes! (Roleplay Scenario Response)


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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