Legolas_Aos

Hello! I am so sorry to tell you that your application has been:

I enjoyed reading your application and am glad you have taken an interest in our server - Before you're accepted, though, I need you to change a few details in your application:

- Please read over our rules one more time and develop your descriptions of Metagaming and Powergaming further, your descriptions are too vague.

- Please read over our lore on the Wiki where you can find information about places and cities in Atlas! You can include an Elven city as the city your character moved to, instead of "To the place where he lives now."

- Develop your backstory more! While it is a good base, I'd like to see more details and specific ideas. Some things you can do is make a name for the gang your character wants to make, why he's an orphan, where the far-away land was and why he wants to start a gang. Be creative! Have fun and develop your character.

- Please look over your interesting facts; Include at least one weakness.

You can make these changes by submitting a new application; however I recommend you sign up for an account on our forums so in the future you can just edit an application instead of creating an entirely new one. 

If you need any help - Please, do not hesitate to send me a message. I am more than happy to help you. If you cannot reach me, please join the New Player Discord! It's a place where dozens of people are assigned to assist you with any questions or assistance you need. 

Here is the link: https://discord.gg/WSQJgT