LelBoiPotato

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Please improve both your powergaming and metagaming definitions. You can find more information on them here.

- Please avoid using common tropes in your character biography! Your family being killed by barbarians/orcs/whatever is commonly used in applications.

- Your character being skilled at using an axe at the age of 16 to the extent they are would be considered powergaming.

- Please add lore references to your biography! This could be anything from a religion to a settlement name. You can look at the wiki pages for Nations and Charters, Races, or our current map, Almaris.

- In your physical description, you mention your character is 7'5. Humans are between 4'8 and 6'4, please change this accordingly. If you need to reference the lore, you can find it here.

- Your personality needs you to have a significant disadvantage. Please add one.

- Your character drive needs to be at least two sentences long! It must also link in to your character biography.

- Your character fears should be at least two sentences.

- Your roleplay scenario is too short! Please expand it to be at least 4 sentences, including at least one action and dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ N¡ck#4884 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Polysemic to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord, which you can find here: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you have a look around the wiki! WIKI