LePouletMayo

Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to many changes needing to be made, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

• French doesn’t exist in LotC. Please correct this in your Character Biography. 
• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks doesn’t make sense. 
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
• Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
• Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
• Please note that “Nathaniel Carwell” doesn’t exist, so unless you have someone to play them for you, they won’t be able to be found in LotC.
• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • https://app.grammarly.com/

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @LotsOfMuffins#0119, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/191596-the-new-player-guide/.