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LilyPotter1970
  • Rules: Yes
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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: By saying my character’s action, and giving the other character, that I am role-playing with a chance to role-play back.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It disrupts fair roleplay because realistically you would not know in real life that information if this is real life. Doing that gets your character out of character and makes others frustrated.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


If you know who I am than you know why I came… but very well. I’m looking for my brother and I very much hope that you could help me… please. The old hag goes to sit on the cushion in front of her, looks at her and says “ what would I get in return “. Astrid Wood looking back at her said “ anything “, she responds with saying “ then I’m sure we can come to a agreement… I knew your brother and I knew he spent time with bad people… dangerous people, I’m not surprised he went missing” with frustration she stop the old hag’s talking with saying “Yes yes I know, he wasn’t perfect and he kept secrets, but that’s not what I want you for… I need to know where he might have went or someone else who will know”. The old hag response with “ The Black Pub… there there a man in a black coat, he always sits in the corner with his head down, he will tell you what you need, But you did not hear this from me”. She quickly thanked her and leave for the Black Pub in hopes of finding her brother and keeping the promise she made to her father that she will always be there and protect her brother which is a promise she sees now is more important than she thought. Once she reach the pub she enter trying not to make her presence unknown while looking for the man in the black coat. She look around trying to find him, and there he was in the corner of the pub sitting alone in a table. She walked towards him and sit on the seat in front of him, not saying anything for a moment she says“ what can you tell me of Cor Wood”.


Character Name: Astrid Wood
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 5,3 150 pounds brunette green eyes Small top and skirt
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✿You’re on the right track!  just a few things you need to change!

 

✿ Your username  doesn't seem to be correct! Please double check your spelling 

 

✿ Your Metagaming reasoning,  seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿ Your Powergaming method, seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿Please make sure to include at least six sentences in Roleplay scenario ! Its a great start! Make sure you are emoting in third person “ He said/she said/ they moved.”  The roleplay scenario most be both action as well as diaolouge.


 

You only have 48 hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes; you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord: Tigergiri.  If you don’t have Discord, please message me in the forums here! 

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✿ Your username  doesn't seem to be correct! Please double check your spelling. If you need help dm me on discord! image.thumb.png.6c25dc98879cf7eb83bc0bff46d1130c.png

 

✿ Your Powergaming method, seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿ The name Orion Rozier appears in your roleplay scenarios. Could you kindly clarify if this is the name of a player or an NPC that appears in the game right now? If it is the latter, could you provide me a screenshot confirming that they permitted to be mentioned in your backstory?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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✿ Your username can't be found! In order to whitelist I need the correct username.  Might it be under some other name? Please make sure you are using the Java edition of Minecraft and not bedrock!

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as much as i would love to accept you without the correct username it wont be able to work.

 

 ✿ Your username can't be found! In order to whitelist I need the correct username.  Might it be under some other name? Please make sure you are using the Java edition of Minecraft and not bedrock!

 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Tigergiri), my forum account, or on the server (Tigergiri)

You are also encouraged to join our  LOTC Discord , a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community. If you need any additional help please look at our New player guide 

You may reapply at anytime however please make the above changes before you do so. 

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