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Ø  Please try and correct your spelling and grammar across your application before you resubmit it.

Ø  Your powergaming definition does not quite match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on Powergaming for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize).

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (apart from your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø Please try and expand your character’s biography to at least two decent sized paragraphs. 

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Application Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

I made the Changes.

Ø  Your powergaming definition still doesn’t quite match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on Powergaming for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize).

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (apart from your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø Please try and expand your character’s biography to at least two decent sized paragraphs (a decent sized paragraph would include at least 3-5 full sentences). 

Ø  Please try and correct your spelling and grammar across your application before you resubmit it.

Good effort, but you still haven’t correctly made the changes I outlined previously. Make sure to read the feedback I have given you thoroughly and take your time.

You’re nearly there however there are a few changes that you must make to your application before you can be whitelisted. You have 24 hours to make the changes above. Once you’ve finished editing your application, shoot me a message here on the forums or through discord and I’ll take another look.

You can always check out the server wiki page for an extensive collection of server lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions. Feel free to also join our New Player Discord! Here you can ask questions to our Application Team, meet other players and view up to date roleplay opportunities.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.

The 24 hours is up, however you may reapply immediately.

Please make the changes below in your next application.

Ø  Your powergaming definition still doesn’t quite match the server’s definition of powergaming. Please refer to our wiki page on Powergaming for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarize).

Ø You must include at least one server lore reference in your character biography (apart from your character’s race or family, or one of the server’s maps). This lore reference could be something like the name of the city your character was born in or an event such as a war that your character has lived through. Please fix this using the wikia and forums for examples to use.

Ø Please try and expand your character’s biography to at least two decent sized paragraphs (a decent sized paragraph would include at least 3-5 full sentences). 

Ø  Please try and correct your spelling and grammar across your application before you resubmit it.

If you ever have any questions or need help, please feel free to contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Aqua#5363) or by /msg Aquaquean in-game. You can also /atreq on the server to place a ticket if you require assistance from any of us Application Team members.