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LittlePanther

By LittlePanther

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Utilizing information you have gained outside the server that your character would not have otherwise had access to/been able to know, e.g. Reading about a potential ability online and declaring your character is now proficient in it.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Forcing an action of your choosing onto another player, e.g. "I disarm my opponent" as opposed to "I attempt to disarm my opponent"
    Status: Denied

"Just passing through" I respond, and try to walk around him. I keep my head down and hood up, trying to avoid attention. If he tries to coerce me into something I think is suspicious, I will try to loose him in the market. I will try to avoid conflict, but if he continues to pursue me I will  proceed to somewhere out of immediate sight but not hearing range of the market. I will warn him to leave me alone and that I'm not interested but will fight if necessary. If I win I may well check to see if he had anything that could be of value to me.

Character Name: Wyrn - from Chwyrn=Welsh->Fierce
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Pale ash skin with darker blotches, amber, glowing eyes, copper hair kept in a short braid. Sensible clothes in greys and greens, swimmer's build.
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sarahbarah

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows.

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

→ Your Character Description states that your character has glowing eyes. Your character cannot have glowing eyes, so I would recommend changing this.

→ Your Character Description states that your character’s skin is pale. Forest Dwarves typically have darker skin tones, so please make sure to amend this! I recommend using this as a reference.  https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Forest_Dwarves

→ Your Character Biography mentions a place called Mirkwood! However, this place does not exist in LoTC lore, so I would recommend replacing this with the name of an existing place.

→ Your Character Biography states that your character is trying to gain knowledge on brewing potions. This falls under alchemy, which is something that you must learn from a teacher in roleplay!

→ Make sure to write your roleplay scenario in third person!

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

o    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

o    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

o    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

((Rule clarification - Yes, you can leave roleplay chat with channels such as #looc and #ooc. However, I would advise against recruiting for other servers! For further clarification, feel free to reach out to me on Discord!))

→ If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord teawithsarah#0808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC Discord as well.

→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

→  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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sarahbarah

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

  • You did not make the changes to your app within the 24-hour editing period. However, don't stress - you can always apply again!

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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