Jump to content

Lord_Gator42

Lord_Gator42

By Lord_Gator42

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: information in and out of gaming
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unreal or unrealistic actions
    Status: Denied

adventure, do you know where i could find a quest?

Character Name: rolyn
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 50
Physical Description: small, traveler clothes, green eyes, black hair, strong, 200 pounds, 4 feet 10
Screenshot of Skin:
Go to applications

User Feedback

Recommended Comments

sarahbarah

-ZbQKg3h13WcEFN3kQQJz4EeolzbUTrWTHG4sHzGrJcERljak5n-Rbr5gWfQW95AQkrY810f5moJV7vN7Z2ND7sh_nkP4D-cwb4RBUfoZ_B4nZUvYY_Nf-JxYz795HDtxlAP8oND

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly! (Eye color does not match)

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks. 

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

♥

s4uF6ImhvKyFjPNn40QtjdDV4h43SFq2L2jc1FovTyPGNzPS9SXmF4hoWaaqDmuikHJrFRPxS6byMKDwJqNsHQQpi3HugvRVcXZFrvbBiFegjVUsP1JmhOjlwkWktZ8k-FUCmIHt

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...