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Lucid6866

By Lucid6866

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    Discord: Lucid#8396
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: your character can do things and knows about things that they shouldn't yet
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: you make yourself strong or godlike and force people to use actions
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

"Hello Sir" *smiles* "I came here so I could explore" *reaches hand out to shake mans hand*

Character Name: Lucius Hawkbrooke
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Black Hair, Pale White Skin, Leather Tunic With A Cloak, Skinny, Bright Blue Eyes, About 5.9 In Height
Screenshot of Skin:
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Physical Description states that your character has black hair despite being a high elf. This is possible if he is a halfbreed. The following link can help you decide some additional physical characteristics.
  • Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Skin does not reflect well the race of your character. Feel free to take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Soul#9694]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message SoulReapingWolf to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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SoulReapingWolf

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. 

You failed to make the corrections within the time given.

Don’t worry though! If you want to submit a new serious application feel free to try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Soul#9694 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message SoulReapingWolf to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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