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Lucienne

By Lucienne

    • Rules: No
    Referral: Through a Friend
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I guess unrealistic unfair
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: same unrealistic and unfair
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes. I would say sorry I have to go catch up to my mom. I would feel a little scared at a man who approached me so thats what I would do and then I would run. fast.

Character Name: Lu
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: blue eyes, brown hair, crop top and jeans they are 5 feet tall and do not talk about there weight
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason that too many errors were made.

 

→ your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→  Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→  Your Character Biography states something about France and California? This isnt a place in our lore!

→  Your Character Biography can't claim to be wealthy!

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Please give a definition of roleplay!

→ Your Physical Description states she is wearing jeans? This doesn't fit our time period, nor does a crop top really

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

→ Your  likes, dislikes and fear  must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason please <3

→Your Roleplay Scenario Response is missing some things and must be in third person!  It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

→Your Skin is not up to LotC standards as it is too modern!

 

If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Demon_Lilly#9033, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.com/invite/7sTjWYX

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