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LunarEclipse
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Instead of saying a character does something, say they attempted to do something.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It breaks the immersion by introducing information the characters should not yet know.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story."

((How do you respond?))


"I am known as many things. You may call me Ophelia Nightshade, daughter of Queen Octavia Nightshade of the Cloudpoint Empire. Our homeland has been overrun and destroyed by barbarians. We were forced to flee. We started sailing towards the neighboring continent. A storm sank our ship, and we drifted ashore on this continent. We set off to find a village of some kind, but as we entered a forest, a small group of goblins attacked us. We were unarmed, and they killed my parents and kidnapped my sister. They took everything I had. I ran for what seemed like days, until I arrived here. How did you know I would be coming?"

 

You sit in silence for several minutes, before the old woman responds.

 

"That is not for you to know yet, Ophelia. You will find out in due time. For now, I hope we can offer you some hospitality."

 

"That would be much appreciated. Thank you."


Character Name: Ophelia Nightshade
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Very long purple hair, blue eyes, pale skin. Short and slender, 5 feet tall. 40 kilograms. Loose black robes, black combat boots, amethyst necklace
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your character’s Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

Humans cannot have naturally purple hair. If you would like to read up more on the racial traits for Humans, please see this link:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199093-core-race-lore-humans/

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that your character is Royalty, please remember they have been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, they will be the main character in their own story. 

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person. This means typing "He / him / his", "She / her / hers" or "They / them / theirs"

 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race due to its purple hair. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll help you, or take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

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If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your character’s Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

Humans cannot have naturally purple hair. If you would like to read up more on the racial traits for Humans, please see this link:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199093-core-race-lore-humans/

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that your character is Royalty, please remember they have been a background character up until this point. Once accepted, they will be the main character in their own story. 

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person. This means typing "He / him / his", "She / her / hers" or "They / them / theirs"

 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s race due to its purple hair. If you need help fixing it, please reach out and I’ll help you, or take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

 

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