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Lymey

By Lymey

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Its_Andrew#9645
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is like someone says to u out of character "mine character is sick" then u reply with "i heard you were sick"
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergaming is like "he swung his axe and killed her" insteand of "he would attempt to swing his axe at her throat"
    Status: Denied

"hi--its weird seeing another person here--umm adeventure i guess"

Character Name: holly
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: eye color is forest green, short, brown hair
Screenshot of Skin:
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Character's Likes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long! 

  • Your character cannot have a tail, as it does not match your race.

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response is too short and should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. It should also be at least two sentences long!

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Character's Fear Response states that your character's father died from being attacked by a shadow. This is not LoTC lore friendly so I would recoomend editing this as well!

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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