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Manzenilla2169
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: gyro.tea#1067
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: This is as it would kill the role-play experience for the people targeted by the godly actions or make it unfair for the people who can't do those.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Because if word spreads around it shows further elements of the role-play that can kill the natural progression for others.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: "I think it is best for you sake for you to yet know my story."

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…


Character Name: Manza
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: A light male shrouded in armor with a thick helmet seemingly attached to him by some magic. The cape on his back is war-torn and tattered.
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Hi friend! You're almost there, your app needs some fixing and editing.

You have 24 hours from now to make the following changes:

 

Your Metagaming and Powergaming are on the right track but not there yet.

Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly.

 

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short.

It has to be in the 3rd person. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one action.

 

Your Physical Description is a bit short.

Please include the characteristics of an Orc such as their height, eye color, hair, etc. 

 

Your Skin is not the standard of an Orc skin!

Please check out the LOTC Skin Archive to see the examples of an Orc skin.

 

If you need help with your application, feel free to message me on the forums or through discord: dove#8701

Or you can ask for help in the LOTC Discord

 

Good luck friend!

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming are on the right track but not there yet.
  • Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short.
  • It has to be in the 3rd person. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one action.
  • Your Physical Description is a bit short.
  • Please include the characteristics of an Orc such as their height, eye color, hair, etc. 
  • Your Skin is not the standard of an Orc skin!
  • Please check out the LOTC Skin Archive to see the examples of an Orc skin.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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