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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When Julia lives with only her brother and sister, what she realizes is that it is difficult to live without parents and she is trying not to let other people experience this longing.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Elf
    Status: Denied

Julia, who came here to live with her older sister and brother, is surprised by this man, and after hearing what they say, she says, "I came here to live with my sister and brother, I plan to go to university here and become an elf, usually after I become an elf, I want to establish a company and help people who need help there.

 
Julia, who came here to live with her older sister and brother, is surprised by this man, and after hearing what they say, she says, "I came here to live with my sister and brother, I plan to go to university here and become an elf, usually after I become an elf, I want to establish a company and help people who need help there.
 
Character Name: Julia
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: 1.69 height 48 kilos red hair
and green eyes
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters


- Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
 

- Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 


- Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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