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By martenma

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: addi #8732
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: if u play game like u live in it you don't talk with people other side of the map.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when your are too op
    Status: Denied

Adenture brings me here. You look like local can u show me where can i buy sharpest sword and help me with directions? my old sword is little rusty.

Character Name: Marten
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: brown ayes, brown hair, blue jacket, brown bag.
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AlphaMoist

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to having too many mistakes, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

→ Your Metagaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references. Please remember to include at least two. These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are, etc.

 

 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail. If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/ 

 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord AlphaMoist#5682, and I recommend you join the LotC Discord using the following invite: 

 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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