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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Marv_streaming #6162
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: is when you inform yourself outside of the game to get better
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: when mutch players roleplay to a specific gole
    Status: Denied

Hello. my name is christpher. I come to the city to live on my own and fight my feas. 


Character Name: Sir Cristopher Embes
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: beautiful, 1,19 Meters,brown hair,and green eyes, lether pans and elegant green pullover, fit and sportly, 55 kilos
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason that too many errors were made.

 

Your Metagaming Definition is correct, though please add an example so I can tell you fully understand!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

→  Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

please state whether you have roleplayed before or not!

Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least TWO! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

Your  likes and dislikes must be at least 2 sentences long and contain a reason please <3

Your Skin is not up to LotC standards, as it makes use of noise shading

Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short and is missing some things! It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

 

If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord Demon_Lilly#9033, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

 https://discord.com/invite/7sTjWYX

 

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