Jump to content

Math_Enjoyer

Lorelius

By Lorelius

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: creating a balanaced character
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it disrupts it by spoiling the rp
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Lorelius HiggleSnart
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: 6'2
205lbs
Dirty Blonde
Grey Eyes
Red Plaid Shirt with Black Pants
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

"Do I know you? Anyways.. I- uh I woke up stranded on a beach, I have no recollection on how I got on that beach, but all I do remember is a bright, blinding flash of light which seemed to be the color purple."

Screenshot of Skin:
Go to applications

User Feedback

Recommended Comments

  • Community Administrator
Smol
  • Community Administrator

Changed Status to Under Review

 

of-wVRVIlBxl09CaM9nTlP9ECnK6dDYYiG9q3g2_1vTxgHifwHsGsY4sm_ActAxIes-XXgs3gfOdW4lV2fvJYsVuwCIlfmtm-DLIFVchGFkpSHZEBlQmIg2uGNPPoAc_p1EXMkeGnjZNo2KnZ1dc7SGes9dcsB5BxCI_-nWT0LGjW76oQDxp9QZNOO9iCA

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

 

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate as it is too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

Link to comment
Share on other sites
  • Community Administrator
Smol
  • Community Administrator

BI_YK92NrXJAd3I3yjAJBLGHuZREO9-YEZbXObfHPCRQnBu7YpA569rIVC8FqgXyF2W--kSjjOOJkq7NyfPK1Jt2qnNbcz66uLKza1QcSEsyGkcsB6nYkP3iVea6_oCmjAmEuXOTh8cQDD9oF_90iy4

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

 

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate as it is too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...