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May Mousie


Elisabet
  • Rules: No
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta-Gaming is when I give a character information that the character itself didn't know, because I knew it, not "them".
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power-Gaming means to be overpowering
    Status: Denied

Elisabet was born into the lower class, by Anne and William Hogget Bethell. They had two other children, Marie, and Edward Hogget Bethell. She began chores at the age of 7, everyday her life consisted of praying, cleaning the house, making food for her family, practicing baking and cooking, feeding the animals, and milking the cows, and praying again. She was 10 when she learned how to make her own clothes and finally got the chance to take care of her family's herb garden. She was 13 when her younger brother, Edward passed away from a dry cough to coughing up blood in just 6 months at the age of 11. Her parents would die that same year from a horse accident, Anne hitting her head, William going crazy and eventually killing himself.                                                                                                Elisabet has been living with her grandmother, Angus, for 2 years since her parents death, her older sister, Marie left 1 year earlier, and rarely receives her sister letters. Elisabet began her diary at the age of 17, just 3 years after her sister leaving the family. Her grandmother Angus would die of "Unkown causes" the doctors said, but it could've been an infection in the lungs or an infection in the mouth, her symptoms were too disturbing to mention,the infections runs in the blood of the Hogget Bethell's. Now, Elisabet Hogget Bethell is 18.                                                                                            Elisabet is now 18, and dreams of becoming a good mother to her future kids, and hopes that she won't always live in fear of what runs in her blood. Elisabet would later on distance her sister bond with her older sister Marie, she has nothing left to live for, but dreams to leave the past aside.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Elisabet is basically living kind of a sad life because of the lack of money, and dead family members that meant everything to her, and to know that her sister forgot her a couple of times and didn't really like her to begin with made it even worse. But ignore all of that and she is living a pretty fine life.                  (Location of birth:Empire Of Renatus) (Location of current home:Kingdom Of Curonia) (Human, Heartlander)


Character Name: Elisabet Hogget Bethell
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Light fair skin, blonde hair, blue eyes, rosy lips, wavy hair, (Can't add the 3 different attire's the text is limited) average weight, 5'5
Roleplay Scenario:

Elisabet looked at him with a heartwarming smile as she looked around at the shops and stalls. "I came here to just live my life, I don't care about money or adventure, I just want a place that I could call home, and I would enjoy to have a lover by my side, start a family." Her gaze trailed back at the man in front of her.

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Hello May Mousie! Your application has been placed under review for the following reasons;

 

  • Definition of meta-gaming and power-gaming are incorrect. You may check out LotC’s definition of both terms to get a better understanding, https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Unfortunately, Vyranni does not exist in the current land of Arcas. Please add at least [1] piece of lore into your character biography. Things such as race and general names of cities or people do not count. Linked is the wiki page for the server lore. Though city names do not count as your piece of server lore, here are a list of a few cities you can check out in Arcas; https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • The medical terms you discuss such as tuberculosis, diabetes, cancer, and smallpox do not exist with such names. In terms of cancer and diabetes, these are things physicians still do not understand fully on LotC. Tuberculosis and smallpox are also not coined terms on LotC, but they are somewhat understood. I would recommend simply explaining how they were ill! ((If you have any questions about this, please let me know!)
  • In your roleplay scenario, you had a good example of a quote, but please add an emote. You may delete the portion saying “Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. (My character would respond with” And add your emote. You may refer to the one given in the application guidelines for help.

You have 24 hours to make such edits. If you need any further assistance, below I linked the new player discord as well as the wiki. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums, or discord: Carol#7747 

  

https://discordapp.com/invite/Zr4EpNa 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page  

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Hello May Mousie. Your application was denied for the following reasons;

 

** Answered NO to reading the rules ** You must read and have a good understanding of the server rules.

You may resubmit a new application with the following changes. If you need any assistance, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums or discord; Carol#7747

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