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Brisingr
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Reddit
    Discord: brisingr1569
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: By suggesting maybe to attempt a particular feat rather then instantly do, in that way it could be avoided and you would avoid powergaming
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Because let's say a player in chat writes that someone wants to attack someone else, and they manage to defend in time, that would be metagaming, because the character in game doesn't know about the attack
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Brisingr
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 180 cm or 5'9, 80 kg or 178 pounds, ash blonde hairs, grey eyes with shades of blue. Wears a hunter outfit with red details
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Example: Brisingr grew up in a small village, where he was bullied because he was almost incapable of relationating myself with others. He grew up without family, without a family and now he decided to change completely my life, coming in this town, to learn everything good there is and learning how to reveal is feeling of a past made by battles, fighting and blood. 

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

- Your roleplay response should be at least 6 sentences including character dialogues and actions written in 3rd POV.

Example: John grimaced at the dirty pillow cushion, but still he took a seat. "Good evening..."

 

- Lack of storytelling, please include a snippet of your character's backstory even if they don't talk about it. This can be your character's families, childhood, events, etc.

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @KaptainScarlet!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Your roleplay response should be at least 6 sentences including character dialogues and actions written in 3rd POV.

Example: John grimaced at the dirty pillow cushion, but still he took a seat. "Good evening..."

 

- Lack of storytelling, please include a snippet of your character's backstory even if they don't talk about it. This can be your character's families, childhood, events, etc.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is KaptainScarlet! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums.

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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