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Melweaver

Melweaver

By Melweaver

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: BullBoii#8839
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information gained out of Rp to benefit your in Rp character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Saying the result of an action without giving anyone else an opportunity to say what they think would happen, therefore, forcing the situation to be whatever you want it to be
    Status: Denied

As soon as Alistair set foot on solid ground, he'd attempt to explore, seeking out a comfortable spot where he could spend his day, his plans would soon be ruined by the obnoxious man hassling him.

Alistair, assuming the man was some kind of salesman would coldly state, 'not interested...' placing a book between the side of his head and the man, trying to run off. If he escaped him, he would ignore almost everything around him, looking to the ground whilst silently looking for somewhere to relaxe

 

 

Character Name: Alistair Law
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Alistair is tall and lanky, standing at about 6'4, he's pale, has dark hair and pale, blue eyes, he's usually seen wearing simple clothes
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Gnomeh

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that their family had a ‘mighty reputation’ which implies they were well known, this is against the application guidelines, please change this.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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