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Messy Panda
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using knowledge outside of the rp
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Forcing someone to do something
    Status: Denied

A boy who never had a good childhood and thus became a thief. His main weapons are daggers and his bow which was given to him by his father before he died. He lived in Lake Town as a boy but his mom and did were killed in the fire Smaug caused. He barely got away on a boat but when he reached shore he was found by traveling dwarfs who raised him.


Character Name: Ace Ricochet
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: A thief who knows his way around. His weapons are a dagger and bow.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been placed on:

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-You reference Lord of The Rings in your biography. Characters like Smaug and places like Lake Town do not exist in our universe. Please take a read over the lore and make reference to our canon lore, which can be found here: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

-Your definitions are severely lacking. Please add more detail to them, and perhaps an example of each.

-Please change your character's eye colour to something other than red; a more traditional colour like brown or blue may due the trick.

-Upon viewing your skin, there seems to be a face (...?) on the bottom of your head. Please change your skin so it only has one face.

 

Lastly, this is a recommendation, although not required to be accepted, I would greatly recommend doing so. Your character, as it is, isn't very unique. I would recommend adding some more depth to his backstory other than the typical 'abused teenager turns into thief' backstory that has been overused time and time again.

If you need any help making the above changes, feel free to send me a message! Alternatively, you could join the new player discord if you need help:  https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

You have 24 hours to make the above changes. When done, please send me a message or comment on this application.

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