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Cecilia

By Cecilia

    • Rules: No
    Referral: minecraft-server.net
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: It's kind of like getting back to someone (Like a message) and not really knowing what's happening until you get the message to go along with the roleplay, hmm this is hard to explain-
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Kind of like trying to overpower other people or to say your the best.
    Status: Denied

My character would say to the mad with a bright big smile on her face, "Well, I was quite bored so I decided to travel,  and heard this was the place to go!". I'd continue to smile and say, "Oh, and I'm Cecilia, Cecilia Anworth, and who might you be?" I'd soon stick out my hand as a, Hello, gesture.

Character Name: Cecilia Anworth
Character Race: Halfling
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 17
Physical Description: My character is short with, blonde long hair , my eye's are green, my weight is 98 pounds. And I am wearing a blue outfit that looks like armor.
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WestCarolina

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Please confirm that you have read the rules. 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography states that they were born in the month of 'June.' Real months are not used, instead, refer to LotC's time here: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Time_and_Calendars
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Character Biography states that they use a 'fridge'. This is against our server rules! Please review them once more and make sure you fully understand them! It breaks tech-lock since we are on a medieval server. 
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Age is too young. You must play a character of at least 18 years. 
  • Your Physical Description should be in third person.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks should be in third person.
  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki! 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • You did not make the necessary changes in time 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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