MickeyP11

• Your powergaming definition is wrong when it comes to roleplay. I suggest re-reading it based on a roleplay setting, as well as looking up power emoting.
• You have dug back into 2017’s lore, for a location and such for your character. Unfortunatly, it isn’t a viable place.
  • Instead look to being more generic. At 27- your character could originate from any part of [Atlas]
  • There is too much magic suggested in your bio for me to be content. Overall, I suggest a plainer, more generic re-write. Seeing dieties is not something that would happen, for example, unless it were a dream.
• Geoff isn’t really a dwarven name.
• Please ensure your characters do not RPly glow.
• Remember you need a positive, neutral and negative trait. You seem to have two negatives, and a like.

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

While powergaming can take on several forms, what lotc suffers with most is [power emoting]. 

Please read up on this, and alter your definition to suit. 

Denying due to inactivity. Feel free to make the above changes, and reapply in 24 hours.