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By Mickey

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Mickeyy♀#5425
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using outside knowledge without knowing so in-game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Making a character OP for player advancement
    Status: Denied

“Oh, hello there.” 
*Eivlynn smiled at the man* 
“I’m just here for an adventure, but who knows what could happen!”
 

Character Name: Eivlynn
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: A young elf with green eyes, dark brown hair, 5'1, 98 lbs, and wears a green dress with white laces covered by a grey mini shawl.
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  •  Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things that you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

  • Your Character Biography states that mentions a "zodiac of Faesu,” a "raven goddess, Kwakani,” and a “Ritual of Fortune.” These things don’t exist in canon LoTC lore; please replace these references with viable ones.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 

 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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