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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: midnighti #5509
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: basically its to judge the real life version of a person to determine what the player will do in game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: its basically to an largen the progress of your goal on a game
    Status: Denied

huh? look i dont have time for this ! hey are you ok? no wait i wasnt trying to be like that !

Character Name: Exo
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: exo is a purpled eyed black hared African American he is 6 foot and has a four pack and weighs 160
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.  https://app.grammarly.com/ 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

→ Your Physical Description states that Exo is African-American. There is no Africa or America in the world of Almaris! Describe your character's physical features more specifically, rather than referencing real world similarities.

→ Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

→ Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home?authuser=0 We are looking for a picture of your Minecraft skin, matching your character's physical description.

 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord JJ (Viros)#7190. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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