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Yuan
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Reddit
    Discord: mifutvt
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: instead of saying directly for example "Yuan killed xy" you say "yuan attempted to kill xy" so the other player doesnt feel forced to play along. or if you character is 3ft they dont magically grow 2 feet to reach a shelf. a short character cant reach a 6ft shelf so it would be powergaming.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: makes the whole thing boring and ruins the vibe
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Yuan
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Brown curly hair, hazel eyes, pale skin with red cheeks. She's about 165 cm and 49kg. She usually wears her favorite pink and green hanfu
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Yuan hesitated for a moment, which made sense, this was a stranger after all. The stench from the place was already making her dizzy so she definitely had to sit down before she pukes or something, might as well complain to the old lady about her recent adventures. Without a second thought she gracefully lowered her body onto the cushion and began mumbling. -Well... To be honest i had everything growing up. If i wanted a kite my father would stay up late to craft it. If i wanted expensive tea my mother would work more than she could handle... It was going so well until they wanted me to move out and start my own life. My mother insisted i should just marry the a man so i can settle for an easy life like i had before. But to be honest i don't really find the men in my area that attractive and it's not like i could just stay with my parents for the rest of my life so here i am, searching for a place where i can settle down." As she glanced the old lady and saw a slightly judgmental look her face turned a light shade of pink and began defending her childish choice to leave behind everything she knows.- "Hey don't give me that look! Yes, i was spoiled rotten but that doesn't mean i have to settle for less once my parents don't treat me like porcelain!

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

- Please redo your powergaming question as it is not quite what we are looking for.

To aid with fixing the powergaming and metagaming questions click here

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- please resubmit with the change I messaged you about on forum messaging. 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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