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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    Discord: 🐢🔨#6544
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: sharing info over chat
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: unrealistic actions
    Status: Denied

hi i fell out of the sky and i travelled to this place

 

i heard this place is great from my brother who lives in the clouds?

 

he send me hear because there is still air left here

 

i hope i am welcome here...

Character Name: Drago
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 2000
Physical Description: blue eyes, blonde hair, strong, 50 kg, 185cm
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your character cannot be older than 100 if you are applying as a Highlander (human). Please correct this accordingly!

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

  • Your Character's Likes Response should include at least one thing they like about themselves and why. 

  • Your Character's Dislikes Response should include at least one thing they dislike about themselves and why. 

  • Your character cannot fall from the sky or have lived in the clouds, so please edit all parts of your application that refer to this! (Character Bio/Roleplay Scenario Response)

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must contain one action. Be sure to surround all dialogue with quotation marks too!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [teawithsarah#0808]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message teawithsarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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