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Miss_Jessi
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Its_outra_jess#7395
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Playing your character using information your character would not likely have, specifically information you obtained unfairly in the real world.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Creating or using an overpowered character that make the game unfair and not fun for the other players.
    Status: Denied

Scarlette never knew anything about her father, sans that he was human and died in the Great War. Her elven mother raised her in a secluded wood, far from society. In her youth she became very close to an elderly woman who taught her how to use a bow and arrow, strictly for the purpose of protecting the ones she loved. Her mother disapproved of the weapon, forcing Scarlette to train in secret. When she found out, she forbid Scar from even seeing the woman again, who had become a nurturing figure in Scarette's life. Outraged, Scarlette berated her mother, spewing hatred towards her, and ran away. Regretting what she had done to her loving mother who only wanted the best for her, Scar came back prepared to make amends. To her horror, her small village had been destroyed by undead creatures under the influence of dark magic, released unto the village by an evil necromancer attempting to snuff out any sparks of rebellion against Enor, which were virtually non-existent in the pacifistic village. The tragedy awoke a spark in Scarlette, and the newly adult elf made it her mission to use her archery prowess to fight against Enor in the Phoenix Revolution. During this time, she met a man who knew her father during the War. She discovered that her middle name was Zeka, after Eze'kiel Tarus of the ruling counsel. She also met an elven man equally as devoted to the cause, and they fell in love. They never consummated their love, not wishing to become official during the chaos of rebellion, but promising to find one another after. To this day she searches for the one man who broke down her walls and showed her unconditional love. She can only hope he is alive.


Character Name: Scarlette Vonika
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Fiery and unkempt hair for which Scar was named; restless hazel eyes that never seem to settle; shorter than she'd like; invariably dressed in black.
Roleplay Scenario:

Scarlette took a step back and crossed her arms, immediately suspicious. She eyed him with inquisition and attempted to dissect his motives.

"I'm here on a quest, a search if you will. What's it to you?"

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: 

  • Your Character Biography states that she was in the Phoenix Revolution, which would not add up with your character’s age. Please change this to fit your character’s age. Make sure the lore you use from LOTC adds up to the age of your character.

 

 

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! I have also linked the skin colours for wood elves as well. 

 

  • Your roleplay scenario needs to be in third person.

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord at __Soph#3808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

  • No edits done within the 24 hours. 

 

  • Your Character Biography states that she was in the Phoenix Revolution, which would not add up with your character’s age. Please change this to fit your character’s age. Make sure the lore you use from LOTC adds up to the age of your character.

 

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! I have also linked the skin colours for wood elves as well. 

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 


 

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