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    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: mmmaaddss#6771
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is communicating thing in minecraft thru thing that arent minecraft
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is forcing your rp on others, they have to chance to choose what they wanna to themselves.
    Status: Denied

Wow, hi i didn't see you, thanks for welcoming me, hmm i actually wanted to move to another city but their properties are so expensive, and i heard from a friend that you guys have some big cheap properties here in the city, so i thought i would i give it a chance, how long have you lived here in this city?


Character Name: Cyrus
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: He is 25 and have been mining all his life so he is a strong man , he has black eyes, his pants are old and brown, and a green blue shirt.
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario  must be written in third person.
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

    https://app.grammarly.com/

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ JokerLow#6666]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message JokerLow to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

 

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