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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Modern#8899
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Life without living.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Progression through success.
    Status: Denied

"What brings me is not the question you should be asking my good sir, rather ask what cannot be answered." I am Santiago, remember the name for I shall behead every scent of evil in this world that I have stepped on"

Character Name: Santiago
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: BUFF AND STRONG AND HOT AND SEXY AND SHARP JAWLINE SUPER BIG DOWN THERE TOO
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Please remember to keep your application PG-13...

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

→ Please redo your physical description. Try adding things such as eye colour, weight, height, etc...

→ Your characters biggest fear should be at least two sentences.

→ Your characters likes and dislikes should be at least two sentences,

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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