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MoFeng_
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: hou_shou_lao_po
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: I allow interactions to be decided through fair roleplay, consent, or proper mechanics. I also accept failure, consequences, and injuries when they make sense, and I don’t give my character unrealistic abilities or knowledge they wouldn’t reasonably have.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay because it gives a character information they did not obtain through in-character interactions. This creates an unfair advantage, breaks immersion, and removes realistic consequences from situations. When players act on out-of-character knowledge, it undermines story development and makes roleplay feel forced instead of natural. Fair roleplay depends on characters only using information they have reasonably learned in-character.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: MoFeng_
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6 feet tall, black hair, blue eyes, leather or cloth armor in natural tones, designed for mobility and practicality, along with a cloak for travel
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

I slowly take a seat, the edge of my cloak still damp from the road. After a brief pause, I speak softly. “I am an elf from Wacoal Town, a coal-mining settlement.”

My gaze lowers as my voice grows heavier. “My homeland was once peaceful, but the mines began spawning Wither Skeletons without warning. The tunnels became cursed, and one by one, miners were lost.”

I look back up at the old hag, wary but resolute. “I had no choice but to leave everything behind and come here.”

“If you were truly expecting me,” I add quietly, “then perhaps you know why I’m still alive—and what I’m meant to do next.”

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

- Your character name cannot be your username.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions in third person! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate it is too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Please redo your backstory as it is not in line with the server setting. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Landing_Page

 

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Your character name cannot be your username.

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character actions in third person! This is to ensure we know what you are doing! 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

- Your skin isn’t server appropriate it is too modern. Might we be able to interest you in a skin from our skin archive?  https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

- Please redo your backstory as it is not in line with the server setting. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=New_Player_Landing_Page

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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