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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: mokaddem#9470
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: use of information acquired out-of-character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: carrying out of unrealistic, unfair, or godly actions
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Character Name: gandalf
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: tall ,old ,
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

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  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your character’s likes do not have a reason. This should be at least two sentences long and explain why they like this about themselves

  • Your character’s dislikes do not have a reason. This should be at least two sentences long and explain why they dislike like this about themselves

  • Your Character Name is not appropriate. We do not allow movie characters to be played.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

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Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ HypedAngel#2020]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message HypedAngel to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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