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Mollyd Mhon

By Mollyd Mhon

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: topg.org
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: someone text in chatbox and i read her name, and i call her in her name, (if in game i dont know his name)
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: If 10 ork start to bullying me, i need to do what them say , i cant just start attacking them bc IRL nobody can do this , or someone hold a knife to my neck and im start running and kill him
    Status: Denied

Hello, Sir! I want to make a little shop with mining tools and resources. Later i want to grow this little shop bigger and bigger. You know near some shop for sale and an iron rich mine?

"laugh, smile"

Character Name: Mollyd Mhan
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 34
Physical Description: Dwarf look, short, but powerful, scars in face and hands, blonde hair and beard.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Roleplay Definition is a bit lacking - please add more to it!

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action.

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [gavyn#4574]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message __Gavyn to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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