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Changed Status to Under Review

Changed Status to Denied

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to having too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️ 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references. Please remember to include at least two. These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are?

→ Your Character Biography makes mentions of “rings”. It should be stated that this is not a Lord of the Rings server, and we are not affiliated with the franchise in any way or form. Our names are just similar. LotC has its own unique story and lore that needs to be followed.

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/ 

I suggest you read the Server’s rules and read the application process very carefully. After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord AlphaMoist#5682, and I recommend you join the LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX