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  • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: herrblau
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I would structure my emotes to pertain mostly to my character and use verbs that imply there's a chance of success, so my character attempting to do something rather than just doing it for example.
    Also remaining within the realm of reason as it pertains to my character
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Metagaming provides your character an unfair advantage in the realm of intel, by knowing things your character wouldn't know, it allows you to take advantage of situations your character realistically wouldn't be able to take advantage of. I.E. laying a trap based on OOC (Out of character) information.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


The man stepped through, donning a clad expression of vein apathy, a veil of stoicism to obscure his true feelings. He took a seat as he was invited, huffing out a breath before answering her question simply. "I am Losif Vitorovic, though you seem familiar. I was born to a father who was crude and apathetic toward me, except for training me in the way of the sword, as he once was trained by his father. My mother was a sickly but loving woman, who I cared for deeply. My youth was filled with toil, helping keep my mother fed and training with my father. However, my father was prone to drunken rage. My mother insisted he was a good man, so I obliged her beseeching. However, one evening when I was.. perhaps twelve? He laid hands upon her worse than he had ever before, and my wrath was insatiable. I could only see red, taking the weapon my father had taught me to wield, and slit his throat. After taking his life my mother passed several months later, left with nothing I went on to join a company of sellswords. I had nothing but the blade, so I lived my life by it. The fellow sellswords I came to know became a surrogate family of sorts, who I now pledge the only thing I am able to pledge to them, my sword."


Character Name: Losif Vitorovic
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: A tall man with fair skin, broad shoulders, and raven black hair. His eyes are a forest green and his features have patchy growing facial hair.
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below:

 

Your application has already been accepted. You do not need to make a new one. 

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is wavelincoln! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @WaveLincoln. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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