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JordanBelfort
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using OOC information or details to reach a desired outcome.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Only aiming for endgame or best outcome possible and skipping all other expiriences via "boosting"
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Ragnar Belfort
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Blue eyes, blonde hair, fair skin. 6'1 200 lbs. Broad athletic build, but not extremely defined. Beard, expresses hardly any emotion at first sight.
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Putting this on pending for the following reasons :

  • Your metagaming definition is inaccurate. 
  • Your power gaming definition need work. I suggest also looking up power emoting. 
  • You need to include, at a minimum, two pieces of server history and lore
  • Ragnar is a rather cliche name for a large, blonde character. This is only a suggestion. 
  • Your interesting facts should be traits. Things like bad sight, or a stammer as opposed to what the characters are good or bad at. Please look at changing them to suit. 

 

Please, make your changes in your own time! Any questions, feel free to PM me on the forums or on discord, Laurelin#0797

And, feel free to join us on the new player discord too: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 

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I'm going to deny this based on the following:

  • You still failed to include any lore within your character story. 
  • You have edited red eyes into the character, yet his description still states blue. Red eyes are not something a human on lotc can have. 
  • Your interesting facts section are still not traits. I suggest googling lists of character traits to help you decide on some relevent ones. 

 

Don't fret, however. This only means you can reapply again in 24 hours time. 

 

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