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MangoOfLost

By MangoOfLost

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: RedMango #0542
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: if someone does actions who take a lot of time to bennefit other players or himself
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: If you make fun of other people jut because theyre not as good at games as you are
    Status: Denied

I have come here to find a friend of mine. 

He was captured by dark cratures which lunger deep down in other dimensions.

I will destroy them to find my friend.

Anyway u got some food im hungy.

 

 

 

(i dont know how to copie a skin file sry)

 

Character Name: Mango
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: so he is 1.80cm high, he has black hair, he is ripped af, 90kg heavy, jea...
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Josef_Rippelberg

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

- Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters


- Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?

 

- Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!

 

- Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I suggest adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 


- Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think about topics such as how they react around new people, or how they view others around them!

 

- Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself!


- Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

- Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

 

- Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Hmmm#4176]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message Josef_Rippelberg to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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