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By Nepolas

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: sry im from german i cant understand this
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: sry im from german i cant understand this
    Status: Denied

i want to trade and a adventure brang me to this city

Character Name: Legolas
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 27
Physical Description: brown eyes, brown hair, not a body builder, 70 kilo, 1.90 meters
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • You must include Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions. Please review our Wiki’s definitions! Also, this is an English-speaking server where typing is the main gameplay, so you might want to consider that.
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is too short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Character Name is the name of another well-known wood elven character in other literature. Please make your character unique!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks states that Roblox is one of your character's dislikes. Roblox does not exist here.
  • Your Character Fear must actually include a fear. This is just what drives your character.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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