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NiftyBuffalo619

By NiftyBuffalo619

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Poldik6#8387
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: If you something now in real life and your character in game deosn't now it
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Its an unreal figthing like if you burn 300 tnts
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

Character Name: John Bary
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 14
Physical Description: My character has brown hair . My character has also some jeans with black hoddie
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your character's biggest fear, and the things he likes and dislikes about itself, are poorly commented. Please work better on those sections of your application.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

    https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

 

 

 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ JokerLow#6666]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message JokerLow to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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