NIngram85

As you can can see, you are almost done! I just need you to change a few things

1 your power and metagaming definitions seem to be vague. please rewrite them with help of this link but do not copy it 

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

2 you are missing one more referral to lore. This can be a nation, event or history reference.

3 your character facts have to be full sentences and you must have one weakness, one neutral fact and one positive one

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

 I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application ?

WIKI

Whoops, looks like your application didn’t make the cut for the following reasons ?

you did not change your application in time

BUT, have no worries, you can create another application immediately after! 

If you need any more assistance you can contact me on the forums, through discord or in-game! My discord is (chaos#7283) and if you find me on the server, you can simply do /msg chaosgamer_. I strongly suggest joining the new player discord as well in case you need assistance or advice from other players or staff members → https://discord.gg/eySYjqw

m I also recommend you looking over the wiki so you can find good lore to include in your application ?

WIKI