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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Powergaming is a term from my knowledge used to describe situations and play styles of a player being unrealistic for their character (I.e. a wizard character with low strength wielding a weapon like a long sword with ease and expertise). It often interrupts or fulling brings a stop to storytelling and can often overly disrupt plot points in situations affected by it.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is a term regarding the use of information a player may know in a non-fictional setting (either through word of mouth or first hand viewing), and using that information through their character in a situation that does not make sense for the character, most commonly being the character not experiencing the information or being told in any plot situation about the information. A common example is when information may be told from a dm to a player in front of the party that the player's character only knows, and another character from a different player acts because of that information, disrupting not only the plot of the actual story at hand, but also the importance of layered story telling.
    Status: Denied

"Unknown Lands"
Blackened armour curses his body, each step creaking with the armour's rivets groaning in age.

Garentile walks, his home far from him, his family long gone. Each scar scrawled upon his armour, serving as reminders as to what's lost.

The kingdom of Harrenfall, a city once standing tall with its flora and beauty upon the mountains, now lays to rest. This once bustling kingdom of miners and gardeners remains unawakened, a tomb of lives and secrets. Garentile walks, the garden his family once wandered for hours, day to day, passes him. Memories rush, tears fall, Garentile walked. More locations show, more memories flow, a torrent of feelings rise up as Garentile walked further into the epicentre of his torment. Then, it came into view, the place of unending turmoil and hatred within Garentile's heart. The castle, and it's inner sanctum. Flashes of his service to the emperors of Harrenfall invaded him, their "branding" of his armour upon his body with each spike piercing him made ever heavier as their purple barbaric runes glow ever on. An unholy combination of Transfiguration magic in terms of binding magic spells. The magic spells in question, are that of a healing spells twisted and cast by the kingdom's witchdoctors with wards made to reject removal. Garentile looks upon his armoured hands, the metal wounds of fire blasted upon his gauntlets ever present. Garentile took one more look towards the centre piece of the sanctum, the ruined crooked chairs that once sat the emperors of old and brandished his dirtied longsword. He lifted it with their two hands, the very edge of the blade untouched by ground shining from oncoming light, as he swung. His blade met rotted wood, the damaged spectacles of power bursting apart at the seams with each swing, Garentile's palpable anger bursting out like the morning light of the new day through dark clouds ahead. His blade soon rested in his right gauntlet, the chairs of power now being nothing but unrecognisable scrap wood and splinters. Garentile stowed his sword, the blade hanging by his side as he exited the castle, his anger now let out as he walked with the ever-rising sun. Exiting the kingdom, Garentile felt the waves of water fell from the sky, the dirt once decorating his armour now muddied and slid off his metal exterior. Crashes were heard, as the spirals of wind found themselves tossing the Garentile around. He looked up at the imitation of clouds, a mystical streak of scrawling runes going across it with each second, the light spread from the abuse of magic across it reflected off of Garentile's mix matched eyes. And suddenly, that very streak falls, the humming of static and wind foreign to these lands piercing the air, and crushed Garentile. He fell, feeling his entire being seemingly fall through the ground beneath him, as he was carried through an everlasting darkness of currants, his very being crushed with his armour as he flows through the infinite until, finally, it stopped. Garentile's eyes remained closed, his body completely removed of any and all concepts of the pain he just embodied, the waves of agony he felt simply non-existent. Rattled, his body shaking with the imitation of the rustling trees near him, Garentile gets up from his laying position. He finds himself in a place off oddity, the trees unfamiliar to him, the ground beneath his very foot softer and the grass foreign to him. He looks upon his armour; it's integrity completely damaged as its entire form is darkened beyond comprehension. Gazing at his gauntlets, lays on an unfamiliar castle, the formation of the building confusing to his eyes. His home no longer near, Garentile walks, his destination clear; the castle of the autumn trees.


Character Name: Garentile
Character Race: Farfolk
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: 6"2 with armour
Dark blackened plate armour with black chainmail
Scars across the armour, spikes protruding each one
eyes show one green, one grey
Roleplay Scenario:

Garentile has just arrived in a small town, rattling metal echoing throughout. As he looks around, helmet moving with minimal movement, his gaze is met with run down houses and shops. He ducks into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—” Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”


He meets her gaze, his eyes slightly squinting as the part of his uncovered by his helmet is shown. At first, he says nothing, his eyes still meeting her gaze, before his eyes ease and he relinquishes, sitting in the chair opposite to her. The table itself is wooden, alongside the chairs, as the chair creaks with the weight of Garentile's armoured body. "Harrenfall. I do not know as I am a stranger to these lands. How do you know of me?" She continues her gaze, then smirks. "I thought as much, considering there is no such place as Harrenfall, at least to my knowledge." Although slight, Garentile grimaces, his mind beginning to wander. Being quick to notice, she soon continues; "And to answer your next question..." Garentile perks up. "...It's kinda hard to not notice the sound of your clanking armour from afar." Garentile sits still, the old hag soon adorning a slight crooked smile as she stares him in the eye. Garentile soon sighs, finding himself relaxing from the leaning position he took to without intention.

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Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 



 

  • In your Roleplay Response & Backstory, please use an unnamed location or a location already on the server, you can find more information on the Nations & Settlement WIKI Page. (The current realm is: Azuras)
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use/have been bound by (Magic/Alchemy!) Please know that you can’t learn how to use (Magic/Alchemy) until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 
  • Your backstory instance should not include any roleplay, but instead, explain your character’s background and origins.

 

  • Your Physical Description could use a bit more detail! If you’re unsure what to add, consider including details like height, eye color, hair color and length, clothing style, and other distinctive features. These are all great starting points!
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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • In your Roleplay Response & Backstory, please use an unnamed location or a location already on the server, you can find more information on the Nations & Settlement WIKI Page. (The current realm is: Azuras)
  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use/have been bound by (Magic/Alchemy!) Please know that you can’t learn how to use (Magic/Alchemy) until you are on the server. If you have any questions please message me! 
  • Your backstory instance should not include any roleplay, but instead, explain your character’s background and origins.
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  • Your Physical Description could use a bit more detail! If you’re unsure what to add, consider including details like height, eye color, hair color and length, clothing style, and other distinctive features. These are all great starting points!
  • It looks like you left the original prompt, please make sure to put your own story down and remove the example text! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about parents? Ect.

 

My discord is @.hiccup if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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