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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: meta gaming is a ban able thing.it is like using information outside of are own charater using this as a guild, this happen by messaging other players by skype team speak or other sort of thing this can also happen in the server using message command to
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: is emote action that does not allow other players to defend or protect simply it does not give a chance for the other player like-PLAYER ONE CUTS PLAYER 2 ARM this is powergaming an this is an example for not powegaming- PLAYER 1 TRIES TO CUT PLAYER 2 HEA
    Status: Denied

one day a long time ago when LITE at this time he was 16 years old his home at the Serpentwoods  his father was an skilled fighter  he was a kind man but gaining a lot of skills about almost every thing when lite was 17 years old his father was killed at this time no one knew who did and why they did it but the people say they killed him because of some thing his father has found in his adventures  the sword owned by his father was gone lite was disparate for revenge at this time they was no doubt about it 

but they could not make lite stop going to find revenge until he brings the sword lite fathers sword then lite give the honor to lite father that he found out that his father was killed behalf of the sword in this lite could not make a war or fight he had no men and no one knew who did it.LITE was a brave and talented his ]was talented like his father the people said.He wanted revenge and seeking it as the wise man in the forest/woods said"you need the the revenge for your fathers honor and to make your father soul reset find the sword taken from it and take their life for the sword young child find what you own " LITE was ready to leave the forest and all the people wish him luck and hope for their only hope to prove he was ready for the journey he should prove himself for it fight the  man in village who wants to fight with him 2 men came in to fight with lite LITE had a fair fight but the fight was not going easy on LITE a hard one,at the second man the fight he memory flashes making so sense as also his memory started flashing he did not fell well and his power of his arms and feet was running out of energy as his great weakness the memory flash he knew it was some thing about his father memory his arms was badly cut at this point but he never gave up fought till he win after that going though every thing he has given the best of the best to and at last he won proven to be choice to send to find the sword , his adventures only started finding the revenge and only having one thing in mind that the only aim is honor to his father at this time he was named as LUVENCA meaning the BRAVE MAN

Character Name: LUVENCA
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: , wearing dark black clothes all ways , tall , arms full of cuts, white hair cant see when he is wearing the dark black clothes ,long arms
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Ivoreyy

Hello there! At this time your application has been placed on,

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Ø  Though detailed, your biography uses a lot of lore and events that are not part of lotc, please remove these and add pieces of lotc lore. You also cannot possess any magic starting out.

Ø  Your character name is not very roleplay friendly, please change this

Ø  You character description should detail your characters physical appearance, not past

Ø  Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are correct in essence, however they are very vague and lacking in detail. Please add more to these, and refer to our LOTC Metagaming & Powergaming wiki pages for the most correct and relevant info (Just keep in mind not to plagiarise)

 

Your application was good, but there were just a few issues that need editing. You have 24 hours to make the changes. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord once you’ve made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.

 

The Wiki has lots of important lore information, as well as the metagaming and powergaming definitions, please refer to this when making changes. You can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

 

You can contact me here on the forums, through my discord (Ivoryyy#8860) or by /msg Ivoryyy_ in-game. You can also /atreq on the server if you require assistance from any of us application team members!


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Ivoreyy

Ø  You are still incorporating many events that have not happened in lotc in your biography. I'd suggest researching our wiki for a war or conflict that has happened in lotc, and basing your biography around that. You also cannot title yourself as king or major leader, as these sorts of things are earned through roleplay, not just making an application

Ø  I cannot see your skin, please attach the png file or a clearer screenshot

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Ivoreyy

The dark forests, devil clans and killer clans are not part of our lore. I’ll ask you to please remake your biography and facts, to only include events and information that exists within the realm and lore of lotc (You can find this lore on our wiki)

 

You also cannot claim to descend from any form of royalty.

 

 

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Ivoreyy

Please change your interesting facts, you cannot claim to descend from royalty, you've included things that are not in our lotc lore, and you must have one weakness within your three facts.

 

Also be careful, you've made your character seem very OP, which is considered unrealistic and powergaming

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