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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Youtube
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: talking about things in the game outside the game
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: using emotes that are overpowerd
    Status: Denied

Character Name: othello
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: former general
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Unfortunately you’ve failed to meet the needed requirements for your application.

 

Your Application has been denied for the following reason(s):

  • Definitions | Although your definitions aren't incorrect, I'd like you to elaborate further on what you've already written. Perhaps provide an example or two really explain what metagaming and powergaming really is. Here are some links to help you out!: power-emoting and metagaming.

 

  • Biography | Regarding your biography, I'd like to expand upon Othello's background, and really give us a look into what he's been through and things he's done. Perhaps explain what happened to his parents, perhaps some places he visited, or just an overall view of who he is as a persona; have fun with it!

 

  • Description | As for the description, we are looking for more specific details. As follows, eye color, height, weight, skin color, etc; things such as those to help us imagine who Othello is without having to look at your minecraft skin. This is just to add more depth to roleplay and give your persona a defined appearance, especially with the armored skin you have in this application.

 

Do not fear, this simply means the corrections were not made to the application or were not fully met. As always, if you have any further questions or need assistance, make sure to send a message through the forums. Please take your time to correct and improve your application before re-applying to LoTC in 6 hours, as we will only review up to 5 applications in the calendar month. If you would like to contact me, you can message me directly on the forums on discord at MrMineLoveDude#1404. Good Luck!


Here is the link to the LotC Help Discord, I highly recommend joining! You will be able to find people who can answer questions and help you find your place in the server once you are accepted: https://discord.gg/jrgvXc

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