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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Doing something more realistic and not act like you are better than everyone else
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Because you need to either figure out/get told the information in character otherwise it will be unfair
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You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”
 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until you finally gather the courage to speak.

 

"I suppose it's time I told someone," you say, your voice barely a whisper. "I've carried this burden alone for far too long." The weight of your past bears down on your frail shoulders, and the pain etched on your face tells a story of a thousand sorrows.

The crone's eyes, clouded with age and wisdom, seem to pierce through your facade, sensing the depth of your anguish. She beckons you closer, her voice barely audible, "Share your tale, my child. Let me bear witness to your sorrow."

You take a deep breath, the memories flooding back with an unrelenting force. "I am a dark elf. Our society thrived on cruelty, and compassion was a foreign concept. But I was different. I possessed a glimmer of empathy, a flicker of kindness in a sea of darkness."

Your voice cracks, betraying the raw emotion welling up inside you. "I had a sister, Elara. She was my only source of solace in that desolate world. We dreamed of a better life, a life where love and kindness prevailed. We yearned for a place where we could be free from the shackles of our wretched birth right."

The crone's eyes soften, her frail hand reaching out to touch yours in a gesture of understanding. Encouraged by her presence, you continue, "But our dreams were shattered one fateful night. Our village was attacked by a marauding band of dark elves consumed by their own bloodlust. They slaughtered everyone, leaving behind only ruins and the stench of death."

Tears stream down your face, mirroring the anguish etched on your soul. "Elara... she didn't survive. I watched as her life was extinguished before my very eyes. I was powerless to save her, to protect the one person who meant everything to me."

You take a moment to compose yourself, wiping away the tears with trembling hands. "Since then, I have roamed the lands alone, a nomad searching for meaning amidst the desolation. I've sworn to never let the darkness win, to honor my sister's memory by bringing light into the world that so desperately needs it."

The crone's gaze holds a mix of compassion and admiration. "Your journey is noble, young one. The road ahead will be fraught with challenges, but your strength lies not only in your sorrow but in your resolve to defy the darkness. Go forth, and may your sister's spirit guide you."

With a newfound determination, you step out of the tent, ready to embark on your solitary adventure. The weight of your past still lingers, but now it fuels your purpose, igniting a spark of hope within the depths of your soul. The path ahead may be treacherous, but you are resolved to carve out a future where light conquers darkness, where compassion triumphs over cruelty.


Character Name: Ryu
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6"01 black mid length hair 120lb red eyes
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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail.  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

- Your Skin is not suitable for our medieval fantasy roleplay setting. Your skin features a hoodie and ripped jeans, which are modern pieces of clothing. If you need help finding more era-appropriate outfits, please take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s physical description, nor race. It does not have black hair, nor do Dark Elves have pale pink skin. If you need help fixing

it, please reach out and I’ll help you, or take a look at our skin archive, and the Dark Elf race lore:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199111-core-race-lore-elves-dark-elves/

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

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Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail.  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person.

 

- Your Skin is not suitable for our medieval fantasy roleplay setting. Your skin features a hoodie and ripped jeans, which are modern pieces of clothing. If you need help finding more era-appropriate outfits, please take a look at our skin archive:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

 

- Your Skin does not match your character’s physical description, nor race. It does not have black hair, nor do Dark Elves have pale pink skin. If you need help fixing

it, please reach out and I’ll help you, or take a look at our skin archive, and the Dark Elf race lore:

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199111-core-race-lore-elves-dark-elves/
 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

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