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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: kingnooli#3702
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: it a term use in role player gaes for the playes real life knowledge concerning the state off the game to dertermine off there roleplayer personage and there rp status
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: it a style to interact ehyt games our game like systems it aims to maximize progresse towards a specific goal in it really un-fun and un-sociable and it more found in game whyt lots off features
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario

im just here the see someone im dont remeber there name but they live in this city and this is really a nice city

Character Name: ghost
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: strong 6'5 red eyes brown hair 130 pounds in a brown shirt whyt a white hood on whyt a mask covering half is face mouth to nose
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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

  • Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are plagiarized. Please be sure to write them in your own words.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Name is not appropriate for LotC. Please change it!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

  • Your character cannot have red eyes as a human, please change this!

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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