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By BRodyX70

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: BRodyX70#8150
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is using outside information inside the game as an unfair advantage
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Acting as if you are invincible
    Status: Denied

Guhzan was a young elve that was caught by a powerful wizard who turned him and his family into orcs. Guhzan was different from other orcs as he still had passion towards certain creatures. He escaped the wizzards army and went off on his own when he was 19. He had to face the fact that he would never see his family again. Now he is alone and is trying to find happiness. He plans to stay as far away as possible from the evil wizzard and his Orc army.

Character Name: Guhzan infernous
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: Red Skin. Iron armoured plating on chest and shoulders. iron skirt for protection. yellow eyes. black hair. 240 pounds. 7,3 in height
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

 

I have come here to seek freedom from being a slave to a very powerful being. Ive come here to build my life back to normal, and live a peaceful life.

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Fionn__TWG

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the number of flaws in your application, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Character Biography states that "Guhzan was a young elve that was caught by a powerful wizard who turned him and his family into orcs." However, this is not possible with the magic currently used on the server. additionally, you cannot mention magic in your application.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @FionnTWG#3845, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite:

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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