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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming is the use of knowledge acquired out of character, in game.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: consists in achieving end game results getting the most fun end result (it’s not about the end goal it’s about having fun while getting to it)
    Status: Denied

Verstina Shattermore was born in Siramenor. As a young girl she was always attracted to archery and to exploration and liked running in the white forest near her hometown. At the age of 16 her life changed, she started to develop a split personality, at the day she was Verstina but at night she was Ellie LockHeart a wild elf, (although Ellie did not really exist her actions still affected the lands of Arcas) sometimes Verstina found herself in the middle of the land of the Orcs surrounded by a pile dead Orcs, she didn’t fully understood what happed to her so she tried to keep it a secret. One night her father saw her leave Siramenor and head towards the Orcs land, after a couple miles her father decided to confront with her, he walked near her and shouted her name, when he saw that she didn’t looked back he understood that something was wrong, he approached Ellie and touch her shoulder, she quickly looked back and saw someone that she didn’t really know, he looked familiar but she could not recognize him so she pulled her bow and shot an arrow through his heart and killed him. After a couple of hours Verstina got back to be herself and when she saw her father’s body, she understood what happened to her in all these nights, she was torn apart. She decided to leave Siramenor and go to the wildland and live in seclusion far from every form of living thing. Sometimes she wakes up and see leftovers of dead animals.

 

NOTE:


Verstina’s split personality has nothing to do with the server’s personality transform mechanics

although Ellie did not really exist her actions still affected the lands of Arcas


Character Name: Verstina “Versi” Shattermore
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: She has a long red hair and she tends to wear a green dress with a brown gloves.
Roleplay Scenario:

Ellie is hunting animals in the wildlands when suddenly a big a strong deer shows up. Quickly Ellie pulls her bow and kills the deer. After a few hours an old man comes to her camp and say “hello young lady have you seen my---“ Ellie quickly stops him and pulls her sword in an in an attempt to kill him, when suddenly the sun comes up and Verstina take control of her body and falls on the ground, the man approaches to her and try to help her get up, Verstina says “I thank you from the bottom of my heart”

The man replied, “May I know your name young lady?” “yes” she says, “my name is Verstina, but you can call me Versi” “so Verstina why did you tried to kill me?” “it wasn’t me” “then who was it?” said the man “it was Ellie LockHeart my other self or something like that, at the age of 16 I was diagnosed with a split personality disorder it’s a rare mental disorder among elves” “I see” said the man and walked

Away ….

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help ❤️

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference. Please remember to include at least two. You have one with the mention of Siramor; you only need to include one other. These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

→ Your Character Biography has a lot of run-on sentences. You need at least ten sentences in your biography, but currently only have six. If you fixed your run-on sentences, this issue will easily be solved.

 

→ You’ve applied as a wood elf, yet the skin you chose is has a white complexion. Wood elves have a specific skin tone, which falls under a bit of a tan spectrum. You’ll need to edit the skin tone of your character in order to reflect this. Here’s a handy guide regarding all of that.

 

→ Lastly, Please try to fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/  

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord AlphaMoist#5682 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

 

I am here to help, so if you would like assistance, please do shoot me a discord message! I’ll try my best to help you out or answer any questions you may have. Good luck!

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