petrosminecraft

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many Errors

• Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, but it’s a little short. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography states that he killed his ‘village’ father at the age of four, that is Powergaming.
• Your Character Biography states that he killed his ‘village’ father at the age of four so he can’t have his biological father meet him.
• Your Character Biography states that his village was raided and that he lost everything, that falls under common character tropes. Please read up more on them here

1. common_character_tropes_link

• Your Physical Description stats that he has burns on his face from childhood yet your Character Biography doesn’t stat anything about this
• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

1. https://app.grammarly.com/

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

Changed Status to Denied