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SethWasTaken

By SethWasTaken

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: FiveBoxes#4721
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: meta gaming is where they have an unfair advantage because of information that is out of character and they use it anyway
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: power gaming is where you carry out unrealistic actions and force a role play to your own will like forcing other players to do the thing you want them to do
    Status: Denied

My character smiles and says hello he simply tells the man he wanted to find a place to fit in and asks the man his name, he try's to talk to him as long as possible hoping to make a new friend. He ends up talking for hours on end and when the night falls on them he said he hopes to see him again.

Character Name: Hedike
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: my character is a healthy average hight handsome person with green eyes and a green outfit with blond hair and a kind smile
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Amelica

Changed Status to Under Review

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied because it had too many errors. Here is some feedback on the aforementioned errors: 

 

  •  Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! There are many things you can reference including but not limited to existing settlements, wars, and religions. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short; please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Here are some questions you can ask yourself: where are they from? What was their family like? In what situation did they grow up? How did they get where they are today?

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding more detail. If you’re lost on what to add, consider describing things like height, eye colour, hair colour, and hair length.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one noticeably negative trait that will strongly impact your character’s way of life. Anything that can be considered a fault in their personality is acceptable.

  • Your Skin does not match the physical attributes of your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one dialogue and one action. 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application; I am having a difficult time understanding parts of it. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

You may reapply at any time as long as you correct the mistakes that were pointed out above. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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